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BOOK CLUB DISCUSSION GUIDE

 Book Club Discussion Guide 

ISLANDS OF DECEPTION: LYING WITH THE ENEMY

Constance Hood

 

 

We know that your Book Club has hundreds of choices. Thank you for selecting Islands of Deception: Lying with the Enemy.  This is the story of a brother and sister whose decisions result in lifelong consequences. A complete synopsis with spoilers is included at the end of this Book Club discussion guide. 

Expectations

Do you relate more to Hans or to Esther? Why?

What were their personal expectations for their future?

How do their personal expectations influence the decisions that they make? (CH 1)

 

Identity

Hans and Esther have very definite views of who they are.  How did they identify themselves?

How significant is their Jewish upbringing to their identity?

Hans Bernsteen arrives solo in the United States.  What influences him to fully change his identity?  (CH 2)

Have you ever had a time when you wanted to completely revise your identity?

Esther Bernsteen spends high holidays with her family.  What is she looking for? How does this event support her initial decision to remain in Amsterdam? (CH 3)

While the United States is neutral in the war, it has already set rules in place for aliens.  What things confuse Hans as an immigrant?

Physical isolation and social isolation shape both brother and sister. How do they make isolation work for them? What strengths do they find in themselves?

 

Relationships

We meet the first loves of Hans and Esther.  He chooses a pretty German speaking nursing student.  She lives with an artist.  How do their common experiences of love and family influence their expectations in these relationships? (CH 4-8)

What personal conflicts do Hans and Esther face as war breaks out in Europe?

Brother and sister experience disappointments in their first love relationships.  How do they react to the shattering of their dreams?  Who/what do they find to ease the pain?  (CH 10)

 

Crises

In a crisis, some people act.  Others react with rage or self-destructive behaviors.  Why do Hans and Esther respond differently to crisis situations? How might gender affect their approach to problems? (CH 13-14)

Why might military service be a good option for attaining citizenship?  What does it prove? (CH 15-16)

Although Esther has remained home in Amsterdam, her life is anything but static.  What changes is she facing?   (CH 17)

At this point, do you think Esther is experiencing regret or remorse for not following her brother?  How might she express this?

Deception

There are many layers of deception in this book – Hans’s identity, Esther’s lies, governments in turmoil.  Is deception a healthy way to cope?  Under what circumstances?

How does Esther use deception to save her own skin? (CH 23)

Hans is a natural investigator, inquisitive and tenacious.  What traits reveal that to us? (CH 22)

The U.S. army presents yet another culture for Hans.  Why do you think Hans adapts so well to Army life? (CH 18)

The central incidents in the South Pacific are espionage activities.  How does Hans work with others to solve the unanswered questions? Does this reflect a change in his world view?  (CH 24-28)

The supporting characters are also based on real people and true events. How do supporting characters help us understand these events?  (CH 19-20)

 

Worldview

The Holocaust is an attack on human decency.  How does that work with society’s imposition of morals and behavioral standards for people?  Why might some judge Esther’s actions? (CH 21)

Was there any moral authority on earth that might have stopped the Final Solution (Holocaust)?  What might have been done?  Why wasn’t anything done?  (CH 29)

How does commentary from the Final Solution resonate with you today?  Is there a way to intervene and make sure that humanity does not repeat this act?

Germany was only one of three Axis powers.  What else contributed to the idea of a “master race” or “empire?”  Why did Japan and Italy buy into this? (CH 35-37)

 

Self-Worth

Hans is consigned to desk work after his foray into espionage.  He cannot disclose his actions for more than 50 years.  How might this affect his self-esteem and social relationships?

Hans had originally joined the U.S. Army to go fight in Europe and find his family. After the war he learns their fate.  How does it affect him?

He has changed his identity completely.  How is his internal dialogue affected by these events? (CH 37-39)

Displaced people married hastily, sometimes in unlikely combinations.  What would be the reasons for this? (CH 38-40)

Hans and Esther survived the war years by engaging in secrecy and deception.  How might that have affected friendships and family life in the future?

 

Themes for Book Club discussions

Trust

Secrets

Redemption

Transformation

Survival

Sacrifice

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Book Club Appendices

CULTURAL AND HISTORICAL CONTEXT

PARTITIONING OF FRANCE

The democratic bride and her false bridegroom

The story gets messy as we try to figure out who is spying on whom, and why.  Nazi conquest of Northern Europe occurs at breathtaking speed. By the time the war began in 1939, Fascism and National Socialism is well established in the parliaments of many countries. A large populist base is in favor of national identity and expulsion of the Jews.

The partitioning of France destabilized the heart of Europe. Americans think of France as being a tidy ally, lining up and marching along with us and the Brits in a crusade against Germany.  Our image is of De Gaulle and the Free French.  However, De Gaulle was in Britain, and the Free French were a small component of what had been France. France was occupied in May 1940.  German soldiers marched down the Champs Elysee in Paris, which was decorated with Nazi banners. The Northern half of France was Occupied France, an extension of the Third Reich.

Vichy French Flag

The Southern part of France was Vichy France, under a French government ruled by the French Nazi party.  Unlike occupied France with its mix of personal loyalties, the Vichy French were on a fairly solid footing, enough so that the Germans could let Vichy be independent.  The French colonies followed these same patterns, with the film Casablanca as the most famous American example of the partitioning.

Much of Islands of Deception takes place on New Caledonia, a French colony.  New Caledonia was originally a transport colony.  Criminals, and most importantly French Communards were transported to the Island rather than suffer a death penalty.  Les Miserables is an example of the rise of the Communards, anti-royalists.  Australia and New Zealand were also transport colonies.  The significance of this is that the planters homesteaded their lands and were of mixed loyalties.  They were willing to do business with Allies or Axis powers in order to sustain their plantation life.  So, the character Chemin actively supports Axis activities in hopes that the Japanese will free everyone from European empires.

I went to Paris to the Musee Militaire to understand as much as possible about Vichy France and New Caledonia.  New Caledonia was a staging area for some 150,000 U.S. and ANZAC(Australia and New Zealand) troops in their battle for the Solomon Islands.  The exhibits at the Musee Militaire focused on Free French and resistance.  New Caledonia did not appear in any exhibits, and Vichy was also not mentioned.

Months after I returned to the U.S., the government of France released 200,000 Vichy French documents.

I am grateful to Dr. John Munholland at the University of Minnesota for his guidance and writings on this topic.  His book Rock of Contention explains how the Pacific war was staged from New Caledonia.  Our fate was changed by brave people who headed out to floating rocks in the middle of nowhere and fought for freedom.

 

 

AN OUTRAGEOUS REALITY

What a boring world it would be if everyone were perfect. People would stack up in our lives like a bunch of Lego bricks, with uniform strengths and clearly defined edges. Writers build stories, but stories are not made of interchangeable characters. We look into ourselves and at the people who have been closest to us, hoping for some greater understandings. From there we conjure up the scenarios. Personal flaws and foibles have the best chance of reaching readers’ minds and hearts, and of engaging readers in a character’s trajectory. Readers like the edges of life. If we think we can entertain or instruct others, we share our stories with an audience, and that’s when we take some risks.

I was asked to describe how historical fiction writers do this without offending family members or friends.

When you’re writing a story, it’s difficult enough to get your own understandings down on paper. Others’ sensibilities can’t be a major concern in early drafts. People rarely see themselves as characters and I’m going to be making changes as I go along. Like characters, our loved ones have an exterior life that they present.  We go through a pretty intrusive process to dig away at their interior thoughts and desires.

In rare instances we meet a person whose story needs to be shared.  Islands of Deception: Lying with the Enemy is based on true stories. My estranged father put a packet of notes into the mail, about 12 single spaced pages. Dad was a spy and it was evident that he took pride in his work. Was this story even true? Authentic tales of espionage during WWII were something that he could not disclose.  Spying is quiet work.  Coupled with his story was my aunt’s account of her life during the war years.  For more than 50 years my father and his sister had raged against fortune and accused each other of lies and cheating. Their only agreement was this:  Layers of secrets could not be revealed to their spouses or their children. There were reasons for the lies and for decisions that they were forced to make as young adults, Jews in a Europe gone topsy-turvy with persecution and war.  After many extended visits to Holland as well as a foray through U.S. Army Counter Intelligence records, it was evident that both brother and sister were speaking their truths and that they were telling the same story.  It was not a pretty one.

How they might have felt about their characterizations was not part of any creative decision in the book. If I were restricted by “What might grandfather think about this?” I would never write another word.  This story would not be served if these were simple people with reasonable experiences. More than a year after sending the MS out to agents, I know why the story had to be told.  It was more important than the individual narrators. The approach of worldwide fascism in 1939, and the responses of the characters is highly relevant to us.

The accounts of my father and aunt needed to be a part of our larger universal story.

Stories of immigrants are larger than the individuals.  The experience of the Jews is larger than entire communities. My two Dutch teenagers came of age in a world that offered them existential questions, pain and loss.  They were a part of a larger community of thousands of families; people who were forced to leave their homelands and live in exile. These stories of exile, emigration, and the rending of families need to be told. They come complete with the anger, complete with sores, with the scabs, and complete with the scabs picked open.

Islands of Deception: Lying with the Enemy took on a life of its own.  Forget the outlines, and forget the storyboards. These are full bodied dimensional people.  There’s tenderness, there’s rage. Awful things happen, good things happen. Since my father and aunt had lived their lives in secrecy, I had to construct the scenes from their words and actions over the years. The ups and downs of life play themselves out whether they are in a comfortable home, in an army barracks, or in a concentration camp. We have to listen to the character’s experiences. Revealing the human story means that we have to invade privacy.

Your story has life on its own, and your characters are simply actors.

Go ahead and change names.  A few physical characteristics or mannerisms can help.  I made my character a beer drinker, and my father hated beer.  Change a gender when you can. Make sure that significant events of the time are accurate.  That helps readers make connections to what they know.  Before I submitted my manuscript, I asked friends to do some table readings.  Readers wanted to tell their stories too, which I saw as a good sign. We ended up with our real people and their imaginary friends who aren’t really all that imaginary.

One of my favorite characters is a cat.  Hans Bernsteen has to somehow arrive in the South Pacific as a civilian.  His cover is that he has been dropped off from a Dutch merchant Marine ship.  I knew someone whose father was a Dutch merchant captain during the war.  My friend Ina and I sat at her coffee table for a couple days going through Marine records, books, logbooks, photographs, just to see “What did that look like? What kind of work was done on the ship? What is a convoy and why was it so dangerous?”  Ina described a horrific torpedo attack. While the men are preparing the ship for a hit, Mickey the cat is racing to move her kittens to safety. Mickey’s sense of fear and protection told us so much about the attack on a convoy, waves of fear that traverse miles of deep water.  Then, another reader told of his uncle working endless hours in sick bay taking care of shipwrecked victims covered in burning fuel.

These stories grew, and I think my final interview was absolute gold.  I was reworking the end of the book, and had a chance to spend an afternoon with someone who had been a member of the German army.  After about an hour, his son picked up the bottle.

“Here, have some more wine.”

“Oh, I’m fine, I don’t need any more.”

Chris poured.  “Yes, actually you do. Anti-Semitism is coming up next.”

So, we went for it.  The old soldier talked, I recorded.

Ultimately our stories are all about the reader. One review comes to mind, written by a family member who did not read the manuscript until Islands of Deception: Lying with the Enemy was published.

I was captured with the vividly painted scenes of stories I knew to be true as a family member. Reality is often outrageous and that is what Constance has so artfully depicted with her emotionally accurate tale of hard choices and unexpected outcomes. Her book has soul, captivating characters and realities that leave you shaking your head.

Nancy Hall

 So, go ahead, face your people, and serve your story.

 

ODD BITS –  A BOOK CLUB TREASURE HUNT

We think and live in symbols, even when we don’t intend to.  I see symbol as motif, a little pattern that follows us through our lives.  Artists take these motifs and weave additional meanings through the daily events. The symbols and motifs in Islands of Deception: Lying with the Enemy came to me naturally.  I wasn’t intending to write heavy symbolism that required a lot of interpretation.  However, a couple of these motifs might interest your book club as you interpret characters and situations.

We experience hunger and loss of appetite. What do these characters hunger after?  What do they crave?  What destroys their appetites?

Food appears in many scenes.  It remained in the scenes because it told us something about the people and their situations.  What is revealed at this banquet?

Birds kept coming in and out of my dreams as I was processing this story.  I saw them, I heard their flights, their screams. What stories do the birds tell?

How did issues of race and culture collide in the turbulence and destruction associated with a world war? To me, race defines the current of the story.  Sometimes it is quiet, sometimes we know it is there but we can sail along.

BOOK CLUB SYNOPSIS WITH SPOILERS

The purpose of the included synopsis is to assist book club members with things like character names, chronology and places.

1939

Amsterdam at Work

 Islands of Deception: Lying with the Enemy

No one believes Hans Bernsteen when he sees the truth in 1939 — a future of failed dreams, steeped in propaganda of a new world order that has no place for him. The rash young man meets his sister Esther at an Amsterdam café to outline plans for fleeing to America. He has procured two refugee visas for emigration. Furious at the idea of disrupting her comfortable bohemian life, she leaves, assuming his pipe dream will blow over.  He fully intends to pursue a career as a New York fashion photographer.

Hans sails for New York and makes a mix of first impressions on Americans.  A lovely young blonde captures his heart, but her family is involved with the German Bund, Nazi sympathizers. They expect him to celebrate their efforts to steal military hardware. Hans discovers he is a natural investigator with a gift for getting to the bottom of dark cesspools of human invention. He learns to conceal what he knows.

Esther’s self-absorbed actions have left her abandoned in Amsterdam, surrounded by extended family and casual friendships. Her raw emotions are often tangled between truth and secrets, leading to fruitless outcomes. In the summer of 1942, all Amsterdam Jews are transported to the camps in the east. Charm is a weapon, and she uses it to survive. Flirting with an SS officer in Bergen Belsen, she manages to secure his protection for three years. White lies and concealments are her currency in this island of horror, a place shielded by the mountains and forests of German fairytales.

Hans has not forgotten his family or his Dutch roots. He joins the Army, planning to fight in Europe and do what he can to save them. Instead, he is sent to the South Pacific, where Allied battles are staged from a neglected French island, a prisoner colony from the 1800s.

New Caledonia jungle

An American soldier with no ID and no weapon, Hans is dropped into the New Caledonia jungle. His cover is to pose as a Dutch trader. New Caledonia planters, Vichy, and Free French opportunists plan to make money, and settle back into their island ways. His life now depends on his ability to tell credible lies in five languages. He uses his cameras and his broad smile to captivate the residents of a brothel and identify their bosses, a ring of Vichy sympathizers who transmit Allied movements to the Japanese.  His curiosity takes him out to a remote plantation to meet his opponent and learn how this is being accomplished.

 

 

After the war Hans learns of the annihilation of his family and his Amsterdam community in the death camps. The gaping wounds of war are opened for all to see.  When he and Esther both lay claims to the home in Amsterdam, they reunite, sharing truths in Dutch and their collaborations of lies in languages that others understand.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

WINNER – Indie B.R.A.G. Medallion

WINNER:  INDIE B.R.AG. Medallion

Here are comments from the detailed Indie B.R.A.G. evaluation of Islands of Deception: Lying with the Enemy.

“Adapting historically accurate material to the skills of the fiction writer brings history to life and enables exploration of the motives and consequences of documented events. For this reader, this is the very best use of historical fiction. It often achieves a truth that academic histories cannot reach. Islands of Deception is a model of this type of historical fiction. And what a family story Constance Hood has to tell! We follow her father, Hans, from a life of family wealth and prestige to near penniless immigrant.  Intent upon assimilating in New York, he eventually becomes a spy for the U.S. Army.

Despite disappointments at every seeming opportunity, Hans, with his inherited ingenuity, makes a modest success.  In each new situation he seems to stumble upon the very action that will bring the next challenge and the next small success until they add up to exceptional honor in service of his adopted country, but an honor that he has sworn not to reveal for fifty years.”

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An Outrageous Reality

What a boring world it would be if everyone were perfect. People would stack up in our lives like a bunch of Lego bricks, with uniform strengths and clearly defined edges. Writers build stories, but stories are not made of interchangeable characters. We look into ourselves and at the people who have been closest to us, hoping for some greater understandings. From there we conjure up the scenarios. Personal flaws and foibles have the best chance of reaching readers’ minds and hearts, and of engaging readers in a character’s trajectory. Readers like the edges of life. If we think we can entertain or instruct others, we share our stories with an audience, and that’s when we take some risks.

I was asked to describe how historical fiction writers do this without offending family members or friends. When you’re writing a story, it’s difficult enough to get your own understandings down on paper. Others’ sensibilities can’t be a major concern in early drafts. People rarely see themselves as characters and I’m going to be making changes as I go along. Like characters, our loved ones have an exterior life that they present. We go through a pretty intrusive process to dig away at their interior thoughts and desires.

In rare instances we meet a person whose story needs to be shared.

Islands of Deception: Lying with the Enemy is based on true stories. My estranged father put a packet of notes into the mail, about 12 single spaced pages. Dad was a spy and it was evident that he took pride in his work. Was this story even true? Authentic tales of espionage during WWII were something that he could not disclose. Spying is quiet work. Coupled with his story was my aunt’s account of her life during the war years.

For more than 50 years my father and his sister had raged against fortune and accused each other of lies and cheating. Their only agreement was this: Layers of secrets could not be revealed to their spouses or their children. There were reasons for the lies and for decisions that they were forced to make as young adults, Jews in a Europe gone topsy-turvy with persecution and war. After many extended visits to Holland as well as a foray through U.S. Army Counter Intelligence records, it was evident that both brother and sister were speaking their truths and that they were telling the same story. It was not a pretty one.

How they might have felt about their characterizations was not part of any creative decision in the book. If I were restricted by “What might grandfather think about this?” I would never write another word. This story would not be served if these were simple people with reasonable experiences. More than a year after sending the MS out to agents, I know why the story had to be told. It was more important than the individual narrators. The approach of worldwide fascism in 1939, and the responses of the characters is highly relevant to us.

The stories of immigrants are larger than the individuals.

I decided that the accounts of my father and aunt needed to be a part of our larger universal story.  The experience of the Jews is larger than entire communities. My two Dutch teenagers came of age in a world that offered them existential questions, pain and loss. They were a part of a larger community of thousands of families; people who were forced to leave their homelands and live in exile. These stories of exile, emigration, and the rending of families need to be told. They come complete with the anger, complete with sores, with the scabs, and ultimately with the scabs picked open.

Islands of Deception: Lying with the Enemy took on a life of its own. Forget the outlines, and forget the storyboards. These are full bodied dimensional people. There’s tenderness, there’s rage. Awful things happen, good things happen. Since my father and aunt had lived their lives in secrecy, I had to construct the scenes from their words and actions over the years. The ups and downs of life play themselves out whether they are in a comfortable home, in an army barracks, or in a concentration camp. We have to listen to the character’s experiences. Revealing the human story means that we have to invade privacy.

Your story has life on its own, and your characters are simply actors.

Go ahead and change names. A few physical characteristics or mannerisms can help. I made my character a beer drinker, and my father hated beer. Change a gender when you can. Make sure that significant events of the time are accurate. That helps readers make connections to what they know. Before I submitted my manuscript, I asked friends to do some table readings. Readers wanted to tell their stories too, which I saw as a good sign. We ended up with our real people and their imaginary friends who aren’t really all that imaginary.

One of my favorite characters is a cat. Hans Bernsteen has to somehow arrive in the South Pacific as a civilian. His cover is that he has been dropped off from a Dutch merchant Marine ship. I knew someone whose father was a Dutch merchant captain during the war. My friend Ina and I sat at her coffee table for a couple days going through Marine records, books, logbooks, photographs, just to see “What did that look like? What kind of work was done on the ship? What is a convoy and why was it so dangerous?” Ina described a horrific torpedo attack. While the men are preparing the ship for a hit, Mickey the cat is racing to move her kittens to safety. Mickey’s sense of fear and protection told us so much about the attack on a convoy, waves of fear that traverse miles of deep water.

These stories kept coming, and the book grew.

A final interview was absolute gold. I was reworking the end of the book, and had a chance to spend an afternoon with someone who had been a member of the German army. After about an hour, his son picked up the bottle.

“Here, have some more wine.”

“Oh, I’m fine, I don’t need any more.”

Chris poured. “Yes, actually you do. Anti-Semitism is coming up next.”

So, we went for it. The old soldier talked, I recorded.

Ultimately our stories are all about the reader. One review comes to mind, written by a family member who did not read the manuscript until Islands of Deception: Lying with the Enemy was published.

I was captured with the vividly painted scenes of stories I knew to be true as a family member. Reality is often outrageous and that is what Constance has so artfully depicted with her emotionally accurate tale of hard choices and unexpected outcomes. Her book has soul, captivating characters and realities that leave you shaking your head.
Nancy Hall

So, go ahead, face your people, and serve your story.

CONSTANCE HOOD
www.conniehood.com

Constance Hood has earned professional credits as an artist and a writer in both theatre and classical music. Her day job was as a LAUSD literacy expert, educating students from “Which way do you hold the book?” through Advanced Placement Writing skills. Islands of Deception: Lying with the Enemy is her second historical novel.

REAL PEOPLE and IMAGINARY FRIENDS

As a Historical Fiction novelist, I’m constantly blending facts and imaginary scenes.  For me, the bits just tumble around like marbles in my head. Then I had my first conversations with readers.

Readers came up to me asking, “What is real, and what did you make up?”

The novel Islands of Deception:Lying with the Enemy is an espionage story based on my father’s notes. The key events are true. The narratives that I inherited relate what happened and at times there are brief introductions to other players. These isolated incidents were certainly appropriate for army reports, “Just the facts Ma’am.” As I read the originals, I kept sensing tensions in my gut as our two characters negotiated treacherous situations. I felt a brilliant hot sun shining on a South Pacific beach, the chill of concentration camp barracks, the betrayals of love and war.

Readers sensed the deep conflicts that caused the young brother and sister to take actions that had permanent consequences. Those conflicts had to be shown by imagining the circumstances. A beautiful girl is captured and arrives in Bergen Belsen a few weeks pregnant. Her ticket to survival is a flirtation with an SS officer who kept her as his mistress for three years. The character of the man who saved her life had to be constructed from their first meeting in a line up to a 1946 photo of two lost souls.

A key to imagining scenes was the opportunity to interview people who had vivid memories of their war experiences.

I spent days with a dear friend whose father was in the Dutch Merchant Marine. We translated books and notebooks to get the mental pictures of a crowded deck, and the dangers of traveling across open waters. Her father detailed a torpedo strike, and his narrative provided a chance for our combat photographer to learn what was important in a crisis.  As a spy, Hans Bernsteen identifies a coast watcher who is providing the enemy with shipping routes. His vivid memory of the torpedo attack motivates him to take bold actions.

 While Dad’s statement was terse, it was packed with information.

The apprehension of the coast watcher is a climactic scene. Because I have absolutely no military experience it was key to meet with naval experts. On a trip to Fall River Massachusetts, Don Shannon, curator of the PT Boats gave me an afternoon to climb around the boats and ask questions.  I told him I was writing a book, but I didn’t know how to catch the bad guy.  “Come with me.”  We step outside. “Here’s a Daihatsu landing barge.  How about if the guy was trying to get to the barge? That’s how they transported men to the submarines.” Don had a vision, one I couldn’t see.  So, then what? Does the bad guy get to the barge or not? “Let’s get him to the barge, and then we’ll blow it up!”

Daihatsu Barge

So, that’s pretty much what I have done with the facts.  I’ve just blown them up.

 

 

 

WHAT IS IMAGINATION?

How do dreams and imagination tell a story? 

I wanted a very quiet and confining opening to Islands of Deception, something that would provide a stark contrast between the security of life in Holland and the perils of being a spy in the Pacific Islands. Hans Bernsteen is bookkeeper, stuck in offices when he wants to be outdoors taking pictures.

The only real information I had was that father’s family had owned some 300 stores that sold notions, textiles, and millinery supplies – what we call the rag trade these days. That meant that there had to be some 300 ledgers, pages of work that was tedious and exacting. Most of us cannot count and talk at the same time, so tasks would be solitary. There would be thousands of daily transactions to ink and pages to blot. I could almost feel the weight, lugging and shelving the heavy ledgers.

Two years after I had written those first scenes, I received an envelope from Amsterdam.

It contained a few 1930s photos that had escaped the dust and debris of the war. Imagine my surprise when I saw these bookshelves. Here was the room I had conjured, with the addition of the trolley tracks for carrying the heavy volumes to the proper locations.

I wonder if they ever imagined Excel?

DREAMS WE SEE

 

In Chapter Two Hans made a decision to convert.  I have no idea what my dad might have actually done about conversion because he never admitted his original background. It seems that he was reinventing himself into a man he would want to be. Night after night I experienced dreams telling me to hunt down the answer.

During the first drafting process I began research by hunting down a church that would have been there in 1939, and found Fifth Avenue Presbyterian on Google. Figured that was as good as any, especially since Presbyterian would be close to Dutch Protestant. More than a year later, digging through papers on something else, I found out that dad actually had gone to Fifth Ave. Pres. I stopped breathing on that tidbit of information.

Image result for fifth avenue presbyterian church

A few months later we flew to NYC to walk the terrain of the book, and made it a point to spend a morning there. That church certainly was a good fit – no iconography in the windows, simple brass fixtures, similar to Dutch churches and synagogues. Chet and I made up the scene with the two reverends fighting for the soul of the Jewish boy, and Chet picked Welfare Island, now Roosevelt Island in NYC for a place to end the chapter. I drafted it.Then Chet and I decided to try the walk to Welfare Island – now Roosevelt Island.

The tram landed near a little brownstone building. I turned to Chet. “If that is Episcopalian, I’m going to eat my shorts.” We walked around and around the little 1886 Chapel, over to the ruins of the mental hospital, and to what had been the soup kitchen. That was all real. When we returned to the church, a lady was going in with flowers. I asked her. “What is this called?” “Church of the Good Shepherd.” “What denomination?” “Oh, we’re just a small Episcopalian congregation.” Another series of nighttime dreams became real in the rainy morning.

Obviously a lot of the book came from places that are not me. Invented places became real. My job was to just wrap the words around the messages as carefully as I could.

See you soon!

Intimate Moments

Our most intimate thoughts and experiences are often expressed in our characters.  They are our closest confidantes, reminding us of loved ones, people who have hurt us, and sometime, ourselves.  Significant events in their lives matter to us, or we would just quit reading.

So what brings a reader into your story? Is it the portrayal of a major life event, such as a bride walking down the aisle, or is it the little moments that tell us what is really going on? When we are looking at people we love, what do we really remember?  It may be the way they looked, or what they wore, but often it is something smaller. For me, it is intimate moments, those close-ups in time that bring the story to life. They may be intense, or they may reflect the simplicity of life.  What scenes share is that they bring a vision to our readers.

Grandad had died.  After 71 years of marriage. Grandmother was composed and gracious, even though her house was full of people. The multitudes had descended. The  morning of the funeral, she was sitting out in the sun, with her long white hair drying in a soft spring breeze. I had stepped outside under the grape arbor. “Connie, would you mind doing my hair for me today?” It was so simple. She had been pinning up her long hair daily for more than 80 years. I picked up the hairbrush and began to brush through her soft hair, gave her a little shoulder rub, and then picked up the first pins. A few moments later the French rolls were  positioned.

Our long day was under way.

Welcome to my plot…

Why is plot so complex?

A plot is so much more than a trail of significant events.  In Islands of Deception, I had the personal accounts of my two main characters. Hans and Esther Bernsteen both led eventful lives, but for some fifty years they accused each other of lying. Ironically, they were both telling the truth, and their two stories were actually one tale of conflicts and secrecy.  How do we unravel this twisted trail and make it comprehensible?

Accurate events and times don’t do justice to characters who are experiencing desperate and perilous situations.  Imagination was the next part of the process.  It led me to an assemblage of  exotic places and dynamic people, material for vivid scenes.

There were days that I felt very much like the girl tied down to these railroad tracks, hearing the whistle of an oncoming locomotive. The real tension was not in the fact that there was a train.  Where was it going?

“The writing is stellar and the plot so well paced it becomes impossible to stop reading. Islands of Deception features great literary elements and I particularly like Constance Hood’s masterful use of suspense, developed around the switch in the plots.”

from READER’S CHOICE review

 

How do I find my plot?

Connecting the dogs; I mean dots…finding your plot

Islands of Deception: Lying with the Enemy is a story of a brother and sister, dual narrators. Are their lives one plot or two?  The trick is to sequence events, or to make it clear when things are concurrent.  So, I had a nice chapter on the young man’s experiences in New York City, and no parallel event for his sister in Amsterdam.  On a long drive, I turned off the radio, and started thinking about the two characters.  Ideas floated out of the ether.  What would her day in Amsterdam look like?  Where would she be a year from the originating date of the story?  Who would be around her…. the questions kept flowing, and as I turned over possibilities in my head, I began to get a clear picture of the young woman and events that would have been very likely to happen.

My best thinking does not happen at the keyboard.  I just use the keyboard to record what happened somewhere else. By letting the events flow, I ended up with a very sharp plot twist that brought all the pieces together.  In the words of an independent critic, “Islands of Deception features great literary elements and I particularly like Constance Hood’s masterful use of suspense, developed around the switch in the plots.”

For the record, my dog does not write at all.  The cat writes.  Arlecchina prefers good quality pens and Post-Its. She sits on my right forearm when I am working, ten pounds of calico retriever.  I take an Aleve mid-morning to celebrate her efforts and relax the shoulder.

OFF THE TRACKS – The Berlin Crisis

Chapter Seven

East Berlin, August 18, 1961

“Your name?

When were you born?

Where do you live?

Where was your father on September 1, 1939?”

Berlin was in crisis.

My student visa was cancelled. The tense officer addressed us directly, and the bare lights in the room threw a menacing glow on everything. Uncle Bill and I were now at the East Berlin Reiseburo, an official government transport office, negotiating the steps to get me to West Germany within the next three days.

“What is your relationship to this American girl?”

“Where are her parents?”

“Your wife is a Berliner? You understand that if you leave to escort the child, you may not return to Berlin?”

Bill smiled and explained that he was a U.S. teacher, with a work permit for the year.

“I will ask my superior.” The official turned away from us and went to a desk in the back.

“No, there are no family visas, transit visas, or work permits. All Americans are to exit Berlin via GDR transports. No one will be allowed to enter Berlin. You may stay with your wife and her family, or you may escort your niece.”

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